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Without you,
I’d be burning in my personal hell,
twisting and churning,
listless and yearning for someone to save me.

You’re my angel, and you set me free.

Without you, all I’d see is black.
I’d destroy myself, and there’d be no going back.

There’d be no me, just half a soul,
a darkened mind, and an endless hole in my life.

My will would slowly erode,
my inescapable self-loathing
entangling and ensnaring all hope,
daring me to implode.

My love, you’re my strength to go on
when I think that all hope is gone.
But you don’t let me believe that ever.
The doubt that tries to grab me,
you sever that crushing grip.

You give me a peace of mind,
a clarity of thought I could never find,
and my world isn’t dark anymore;
I can finally see who I am,
the true me.

And I wouldn’t have that,
not without you.
©2009 ~Hell-Seraph
:iconhell-seraph:

Author's Comments

I've found myself through you. If it weren't for you, my life would be hell. Thank you, my savior...

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:iconsave-my-soul93:
Me likey.. :] Good response to my poem.

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There is no reason to life; there are only reasons to live.
:iconhell-seraph:
I'm glad you liked it.

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A bullet may have a name on it, but a grenade is addressed to whom it may concern.
:iconsave-my-soul93:
Haha of course I'd like it.

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There is no reason to life; there are only reasons to live.
:iconabworldprotector:
Very good poem. Good representation of the emotional depth of your love for her!
:iconhell-seraph:
Thank you. And I have to disagree with you there; it goes too deep for words. I can only try to tap into the depth and put it in words.

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A bullet may have a name on it, but a grenade is addressed to whom it may concern.
:iconabworldprotector:
Well I think you are doing a good job of tapping into your feeligns for her...I felt like that before...when I wrote poetry for people I love, like it felt like I only strached the suface of how much they meant to me, so I think I get what you mean. Anyway, it was a good poem!
:iconhell-seraph:
Thank you! I do appreciate it. I was thinking that people wouldn't like this one actually.

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A bullet may have a name on it, but a grenade is addressed to whom it may concern.
:iconabworldprotector:
Really? I guess that just proves we are not good judges of our own creations. We can only really see what our creations mean in our eyes, but you should be proud of how you write man. You got talent.
:iconhell-seraph:
Hah, thanks again. You're too kind. I'm flattered. lol. Isn't that right though, what we think of our own creations.

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A bullet may have a name on it, but a grenade is addressed to whom it may concern.

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